Sean & Bailey page 130
30th May 2017
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Author Notes:
30th May 2017, 9:51 AM

Finally get to show this idea that I've had for a long time :D
The ice sword can also be kind of a tribute to Eddard Stark, who has a sword named Ice.

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30th May 2017, 6:47 PM

Those spears do not look very blunt to me!!! XD
But, as I told jerk-face, "Show no mercy!"

30th May 2017, 8:39 PM

Haha, now I'm imagining "This is a blunt spear" to be some edited-in dialogue for censoring purposes.

30th May 2017, 7:44 PM

My dude, if you didn't want to hurt people, you shouldn't have joined a fighting tournament.

Or you should have at least made a shield instead of a sword.

30th May 2017, 8:36 PM

By "hurt" he basically means "stab" :P

1st Jun 2017, 9:23 PM

Oh wow but I think a real Ice Sword would shatter immediately :D
A good combo would be an ice sword and a fire/earth shield!

What the heck is her problem? I get it but she is acting really weird so far. Impulsive and arrogant but... weird.

1st Jun 2017, 10:08 PM

Yeah she has some issues. Next page might provide kind of an answer :)

1st Jun 2017, 11:02 PM

It is actually kind of cool how you used a tournament to bring out personalities. Maybe that was the aim of both the author AND the organizers?
I think it is a real thing though in sports teams.

2nd Jun 2017, 10:14 AM

Thanks. Yeah, I definitely intended to give my background characters a chance to shine, and discover what they're like. ('cause even I didn't fully know that beforehand)

Of course, the focus will ultimately shift more towards the primary characters, but I often find myself wishing stories would explore supporting characters a little more.

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