Sean & Bailey page 85
19th Jul 2016
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19th Jul 2016, 9:08 AM

About time Sean, that only took you 80 pages!

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19th Jul 2016, 12:54 PM

Man, how ironic for both Sean and Bailey to both unlock elements that have traumatized them at some point!

19th Jul 2016, 2:24 PM

Heh, I suppose so, but I don't think they see "ice" as evil, just Ulia herself.

19th Jul 2016, 3:43 PM

Yeah I figured they were mature enough separate the element from the user.

I just find it amusing how they've taken up secondary elements that have directly caused them turmoil. Fire killed their parents and and Ice user killed one of their allies and made them reevaluate themselves. I don't know if it was your intent or not with the second one, but I like the irony it adds to the story!

19th Jul 2016, 6:09 PM

True. With Ice that was not intended, so that's an interesting coincidence I guess.

In the earliest draft of the story (way back in 2007), Sean had water/ice and Bailey had fire/wind, so I just stuck with that - only at some point I thought of adding the traumatic fear of fire.

19th Jul 2016, 10:02 PM

Ah! I sometimes forget Ice and Water are not the same element here.
Interesting to get both like this. Kinda limits his ability pool but then both elements could be synced maybe!

19th Jul 2016, 11:11 PM

I agree that they are very similar, but Ice also allows for things like surviving in freezing temperatures (or even in hot temperatures by cooling yourself down).

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